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Paradise Valley, Montana

As a writer, I’m always looking for places that might inspire my next story.  Sometimes it’s a place I’ve discovered by accident or one I have visited years before.   My current work-in-progress, a literary short story entitled Sego, is set in a place I visited often as a child, Paradise Valley, Montana.  

I’m sure like many, when a place has paradise in its title, I tend to be skeptical.  The word is often used to describe everything from bars to clothing designers, home builders to car washes.   For me, a place described as paradise has to be truly special.  Paradise Valley is befitting of its title and on the grandest scale. 

Paradise Valley is located between Livingston and Gardner, Montana, (the north entrance to Yellowstone Park) sandwiched between the Absoraka and Gallatin Mountain ranges.  The valley once dotted with ranches, now more luxury homes, is home to the Yellowstone River and unbelievable vistas. 

I first became acquainted with Paradise Valley at a young age.  My aunt and uncle operated a cattle ranch in the valley.  I clearly remember the summer days I spend there as a boy.  We woke early to milk the cows then ate pancakes outside under the shadow of the mountains in my aunt’s flower garden summer kitchen.  We spent days with our cousins riding horses to change irrigation dams in the rolling hills leading to the mountains, fished for trout in the mountain fed streams, dug night crawlers under swaying aspen trees, floated the Yellowstone River’s frigid water on hot summer days in inner tubes, and often packed a lunch to eat in a mountain meadow. 

Granted, having family living in such a wonderful place can shape an opinion, but I think most that have the chance to witness the beauty of Paradise Valley will come away feeling the same as I do. It has an intoxicating presence. 

photo by Tim Gage https://www.flickr.com/photos/timg_vancouver/

You can’t just drive through the valley to appreciate it, you need to slow down and get out of the car.   Simply head south out of Livingston on highway 89.  Several miles south of Livingston, you’ll come to East River Road (State hwy 540).  Take the curvy two lane highway heading south and you’ll come to a quaint little restaurant called Pine Creek Lodge.  Take Hwy 540 a little farther south and you’ll come to Luccock Park Rd that leads into the mountains and Pine Creek Recreation Area.  There you will find a wonderful hiking trail that climbs through a pine forest and along the rushing waters of Pine Creek.

After all that fresh air, head further south and you’ll come to Chico Hot Springs.  Growing up, it was a place to swim and soothe our aching muscles, but today it has much more to offer.  Check it out here:https://www.chicohotsprings.com/

Rick Steves, the famous travel writer, refers to less traveled places in Europe as “back doors.” Paradise Valley is a “back door.” I’d urge anyone heading West to Yellowstone Park, to take  little extra time for a visit.    

photo by Troy Smith https://www.flickr.com/photos/high_trails/

My Latest Short Story: Song of the Night Woods

I’m happy to say my short story Song of the Night Woods was recently published by Antigonish Review.  I have been working on this story for the past five years.  Like all my writing projects, many people played a role in getting the story into its final form.  I want to thank Nancy Webb,  Ruthanne Brule, Al Long, Paula Morrow and my wife Sheila.  Each has given me valuable feedback and in so doing have helped me to realize my vision. 

This is my second short story to be published, the first one in print.  The journal with the story is available for purchase as hard cover or as digital version here: Antigonish Review

A holiday musical treat for you to enjoy!

Discovering Story Ideas

Being a percussionist growing up was influential in my love of music.  I played a diversity of music: Rock-n-roll, big band swing and ballads, marching band and symphonic, all of which I still enjoy today.  But the music that resonates most with me is classical.   

Ever since I was old enough to appreciate the likes of Mozart and Beethoven, I wondered how composers wrote their songs.  It fascinated me how they incorporated so many different instruments into a cohesive order, and how a change of instrumentation could create a completely new sound.  For example, Rachmaninov’s Zdes’ khorosho (How fair is this spot) was originally written for piano and voice.  However, the song was orchestrated with the trumpet replacing the voice and the orchestra replacing the piano. It’s amazing how the orchestrated song, while having a completely new sound retains the same emotional resonance of Rachmaninov’s initial composition.   Check out the two versions here:

While listening to classical compositions I often wonder about the composer’s creative process.   Was their worked influenced by other composers?  Was it based on a life experience? 

Before I started writing, I had the same questions about fiction.  How does one create a story out of thin air?  As I developed my writing skills, I discovered there are many answers to that question.  However, for me there is one element that remains true in every story I write, life experiences. 

Events that I have experienced, people I have meet and places I have visited, play a big part in the development of my stories.  To give you an idea, I’ve included a few examples from stories I have written. 

My recently sold short story Song of the Night Woods, (Antigonish Review) has roots in an event that occurred when I was in college some 35 years ago.  It took place on a sultry summer night in the Illinois Mississippi River bottom amongst a sea of growing corn.  The story came to light only few years ago after recalling what happened that night.

The Christmas Zephyr, (Foliate Oak Literary Magazine) took shape after riding the train to Chicago several years ago to attend a writer’s conference.  Seeing the faces of all the different travelers and overhearing some of their conversations made me wonder and the story was born. 

My work-in-progress, a short story entitled Sego, actually grew from a photo of my dad.  He’s standing next to a horse named Sego after spending the day working cattle on my uncle’s ranch in Montana.  The photo, over forty five years old, brought back memories of all the summers I spent visiting and working on the ranch that eventually led to the story. 

Rachmaninov’s song Zdes’ khorosho has roots in a life experience too. He wrote the song shortly after being married while living on his beloved family estate in Russia.  Listening to his song after reading the poetic lyrics (link to lyric translation), one can feel his love for the land around him and his new wife.    

All writers strive to have their work connect with their audience.  Living through life’s gamut of experiences, the good and bad, the joyful and sad, gives perspective.  While so many different things can prompt a creative endeavor, it’s this perspective that breathes life into a creative endeavor.

 

What I Wish I Had Learned Before I Started Writing Fiction

 

The Determined Writer

I loved the diversity of courses I completed getting my undergraduate degree.  While I took a heavy load in the sciences (preveterinary curriculum), I added extra English classes whenever I could fit them into my schedule.  I wasn’t an avid reader growing up.  I was too busy exploring the outside world, building tree forts and probing the flora and fauna of local creeks and woods to care much about fiction.  But those wonderful college literature and writing courses fired my imagination and wonderment for the world.  They introduced me to character and plot development, theme and symbolism, and got me thinking about, maybe someday, writing my own stories.

Years later, I used what I learned in college when I started experimenting with my writing.  I also plowed through a plethora of writing books, many which emphasized the same things I had already learned.  I attended writing conferences that always seemed heavily focused on developing a writer’s voice and the submission process.  While having a good understanding of these basics of writing fiction is important, it turns out there was one essential element I missed along the way.  Looking back, I’m not sure how I overlooked it, maybe it was my blind eye or perhaps it was in the books and lectures and I had simply taken the information for granted.

Several years ago, I was brainstorming a new writing project with my writer friend Nancy Webb, and she gently suggested I learn more about story structure.  I wrinkled my noise and ignored her suggestion.  Story structure sounded too formal, too confining.  But Nancy was persistent.  She laid out the basic arc of a story and showed me how you could find this fundamental concept in nearly every novel and film.

It turns out I had purchased a book about story structure years before called “Story Engineering” by Larry Brooks, that was sitting on my shelf ignored.   I decided to give it a try.  What Larry had to say reinforced Nancy’s advice.    I was still skeptical, but as an exercise I used Larry and Nancy’s suggestions in laying out the story arc for my new novel.   It was an awakening experience.

Though I thought I knew the direction of my story, writing out the key structural elements brought a fresh clarity.   New ideas emerged, and I had a better idea where to place different plot features for maximum effect.  Typically it might have taken five or six drafts to get a coherent manuscript, utilizing the new technique, it only took two.

Obviously, understanding story structure doesn’t guarantee my story will sell, but it has sure made the story writing process easier, more fulfilling and quicker.  I have included several books and a helpful blog link to those of you interested in learning more.

The Plot Whisperer by Martha Alderson

Story Engineering by Larry Brooks.  Larry also has a recent blog post that summarizes  his thoughts on story structure.  You can read his post here.

 

 

 

 

Thanks for Sharing the Blogging Advice

 

First off, I’d like to thank all of you that passed along your thoughts and suggestions regarding my monthly newsletter.  I appreciate the feedback.  The majority of you mentioned enjoying posts about the writing journey.  I have to agree.  I enjoy reading about the difficulties, the learning processes, the different paths writers take to achieve their creative goals too.  Every writer has a unique story and I’m no different.  In the coming months and years, I look forward to giving you a glimpse into my personal journey.  Hopefully, you will come away with a tip or two that is both inspiring and helpful.       Continue reading

A Quick Question for my Readers….

It’s been nearly a year since I put together my website and added a monthly newsletter/blog.  I have to admit I’ve enjoyed writing the short pieces.  It’s fun seeing what topics pique different reader’s interest.

In hopes of improving the information I deliver, I’m reaching out to those of you that have signed up to my monthly newsletter, and others that happen on to my website.  I’m interested in learning what topics are  most appealing to you? What’s likely to whet your appetite and continue reading a post? Are photos and appropriate links helpful?

For fellow writers who write a regular newsletter/blog that struggle (like me) with the issue of trying to develop regular, meaningful posts, here’s a great piece on the subject from Dan Blank at We Grow Media:   http://wegrowmedia.com/10-simple-steps-to-steady-blogging/

Feel free to email me any thoughts you care to share at:  davewatsonauthor@gmail.com

A Trip to Europe… a Recharge for the Creative Spirit

Big Ben, only hours away

Europe seems so far away, 4000 plus miles, a eight to nine hour flight from the continental United States.  Why invest the time and expense of making such a trip?

Bodleian Library in Oxford, England. Location for several Harry Potter films.

In a series of posts I’d like to share some things I learned on a recent journey with my son and future daughter-in-law to Great Britain and Switzerland.  I’ll share a few tips, talk about some of the challenges of overseas travel and explain why taking such a trip is a winning proposition for individuals who thrive on exploring their creativity, enjoy learning about history or simply have an inkling of wanderlust. Continue reading

A Writer Can Learn a lot from the Movies

Writing is a life long journey of learning.  Maybe it’s finding a different way of developing plot, characterization or writing realistic dialogue.  For me, discovering a new technique that improves my storytelling is an uplifting part of the creative process.

There are countless resources available for learning new writing techniques.  Bookstore shelves are jammed with how-to books, and conferences, while expensive, are good sources depending on the lecturer.  However, over the years, I have picked up the best tips from the fellow writers I have met.  Not only is it beneficial to have someone battling in the trenches give your manuscript an honest review, but chances are they have learned a technique or two along the way that can help elevate your work.  Practicing creators make the best teachers. Continue reading

Finding Time to Create

The most frustrating thing about expressing one’s creativity is finding the time to do it. If you’re like me, between working a full-time job, maintaining a house, raising a family and just plain living, there aren’t many free moments for creative projects.  In this post I’d like to share a tip I’ve used over the years, in my case for writing, that has allowed me to not only finish an idea, but also to get some of them published. Continue reading

You’re a Cow Doctor and a Writer?

Me with one of my cow patients.

Over the years when I have attended writer conferences, it never fails to elicit an interesting response when I’m asked what I do for a living (most fiction writers have a primary career other than writing).   When I answer that I’m a large animal veterinarian, the majority respond with a plethora of questions wondering what a cow doctor does.  I’ve always found it fun to share stories about a job most people know so little about.  However, on one occasion, in the early years of my writing pursuit, I received a question I wasn’t ready to answer.  After replying that I was a veterinarian, the woman contorted her face and asked, “Why do you write then?”  I was at a loss for words.  Though I thought it was a biting question, she had a good point.  Why did I feel the drive to spend the little free time I had trying to put the jumble of thoughts and words into some semblance that others might find interesting to read? Continue reading

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